tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4777014616810205278.post8202568660681183398..comments2011-02-27T21:09:36.022-08:00Comments on Useful Entropy: ConvictionJake Conradhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08741859781924527621noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4777014616810205278.post-27121079587626323062009-11-18T12:45:52.472-08:002009-11-18T12:45:52.472-08:00Geez, Jake, do you have to go all hearts and flowe...Geez, Jake, do you have to go all hearts and flowers on us? That was a good read- maybe not such a good bedtime story though (made for some interesting dreaming, lol)Sheri Dickson Woodsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16552232473184842557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4777014616810205278.post-18529280860551905022009-11-16T23:10:13.661-08:002009-11-16T23:10:13.661-08:00Jake, I really liked it. Completely absorbing, wit...Jake, I really liked it. Completely absorbing, with a touch of the scarey in the style of (Say thankee Sai) the Master. I picture the title being something like "Under the Spell" or maybe some variation, that incorporates the --albeit necessary --indoctrination missionaries go thru (I didn't say "brainwashing," but cry your pardon if you think I'm alluding to it)and the trance that overtook Taylor. I was left wanting to know much, much more about Steve, which says to me that this story has room for development. Even though Jana told me you were happy to be done with it, and that you thought it sounded "juvinile" I was just turned on. I think Steve should be fleshed out more, whether in this story or another, do it please ya.<br /><br />Long days and pleasant nights,<br />-eErikahttp://www.erikafield.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4777014616810205278.post-16761523779308341252009-11-15T12:02:32.020-08:002009-11-15T12:02:32.020-08:00I'm glad I'm not elder Morse...very captiv...I'm glad I'm not elder Morse...very captivating,and I want more, more stories from you!desertortoisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02192632542278064855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4777014616810205278.post-8834279242466054892009-11-15T11:08:10.497-08:002009-11-15T11:08:10.497-08:00I love your writing style. I also like that you do...I love your writing style. I also like that you don't feel the need to make your stories have a "happy ending". Please keep writing and posting!janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16260198172915172818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4777014616810205278.post-63666234707391279102009-11-14T23:16:23.542-08:002009-11-14T23:16:23.542-08:00Son, I liked this story very much! Of course I wa...Son, I liked this story very much! Of course I was not surprised at the ending because I'm your mom and remember your writings growing up! Your English teacher commented that your writing was very good and captivating, but always a little on the dark side. Keep it coming!!Momnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4777014616810205278.post-26107566056138706762009-11-14T22:42:11.711-08:002009-11-14T22:42:11.711-08:00great story. so tell me about this story and the e...great story. so tell me about this story and the evil people and all of that. I know that Doug had his evil people on his mission. Are these from you mission? CarolynAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com